Notes for "Out of the Cradle..."
Note that the prepositional phrases
pile up, but that this sentence is not completed until the end of the stanza.
In many ways, this stanza is the poem in miniature as the poet, now adult,
recalls the childhood experience in nature which he sees as the source
of his creative powers as a poet. The cradle, as you will see later, is
the sea.
Originally Whitman wrote "Out of the rock'd cradle"; I hope you
can understand just how wrong that would have been, in terms of the major
ideas of the poem and its rhythms.
Shuttle, in the sense of going back and
forth to create sound, much as the tides go back and forth. This is the
first of several back-and-forth images, which are echoed in the rhythm.
Look for more of these.
September. A pregnancy lasts 9 months
also; how might that be significant to the poem?
Why are the sands "sterile"?
Is this in contrast to the bird and the sea, both of whom "speak"
in nature's language to the boy?Note that the child is
open to the elements, literally as well as metaphorically. How old would
you guess that the child is?
The halo comes from the light of the half-moon.
(Why isn't it a full moon?)
i.e. the mockingbird. Note that the bird
is chanting (even as the poet does); what does that word (as opposed
to singing) suggest?
uncountable multitudes
A word not to be revealed until the end
of the poem.
This split voice--man yet child--is important
in the poem, for the man is recreating his transformation as a child into
what would become the poet.
This is his first definition of the poet;
look for further descriptions, especially his role in translating nature
into human terms.
the Indian name for Long Island. This
is where Whitman grew up.
The month of May marks the beginning
of the "reminiscence."
i.e. the male and female mockingbirds
These verbs (note that they are all in
the continuing progressive tense, not finished past or present) describe
how the poet relates to nature. Perhaps the fact that he is a child emphasizes
even more his openness to experience, as well as his ability to relate
to the birds. Look for other examples of -ing verbs.
The italicized passages all represent
the song of the bird (the male bird, actually). It can be very useful to
read through these passages continuously, to see the various modulations
of joy, hope, and grief in the bird's song over the summer months.
The idea that the singer--bird or poet--must
be essentially alone, though his song is going out to others, is very strong
in Whitman; look for other places where solitary loneness is emphasized.
This repetition also emphasizes the bird's loss of his mate.
Why does he call him his brother?
Carols are generally songs of joy. Is
there joy in his sad song as well as grief?
In a sense, as Thoreau knew, this is
what the great writer must do--translate the notes of nature. Do you think
that Whitman doubts his ability to do that, as Thoreau came to do?
The song has become an operatic aria.
What does that suggest? What clues does the speaker give about what the
aria means to him?
This is the sea. Note the connection
with the rocking cradle. Why is the sea characterized in this way? Is the
sea also "mother nature"? How does this chracterization anticipate
the messages that the boy must learn to be a poet?
conversation
an early term for "poet"
In what sense is the bird a demon? Note
that one meaning of the word is "an attendant, ministering, or indwelling
power or spirit, genius" (and that's the first definition in the dictionary,
by the way) Is the bird also in some way "an evil spirit"? (the
second definition
In what way does the bird "project"
him? Is the bird aware of this? What does this show about the relationship
between the boy-poet and the bird? What has nature done for him?
Is this how he interprets the bird's
song? Could it be that this is also what he thinks is essential to poetry?
Have you ever thought of poetry in this sense?
Who is this messenger?
Coleridge said that poetry is the reconciliation
of opposites. This oxymoron is an excellent example.
clue to what? there must be something
more the "outsetting poet" needs to learn than the bird can tell
him.
The message is completed by the sea.
Note that he is saying that nature is the source of his songs, his subjects.
This is the central paradox of the poem,
for in what sense is death delicious? When one considers the role of death
in nature, how it is essential to life and part of universal rhythms, it
becomes something more than our human horror of our own "extinction."
Notice the use of past tense here, in
contrast to the many verbs of progression (-ing verbs: rocking, peering,
absorbing, translating....)
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